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These are quiet times;
our flower beds are unmade,
speech comes softly in slurred phrases—
the bawdy body hungers
to roam the beaches of Italy,
to coast the coastline from
rocky boot-tip to heal,
converse with wind
joke with waves
forget the lies we’ve muttered
(without confidence).
These are quiet times,
introspective,
yet completely unaware of self.
We’ve tricked ourselves,
petty deceptions,
what we need is to be alone.
But where are we now?
Stuck inside the rhythm
of the shape shifter’s groove,
a Ferris wheel that overlooks the sea,
chases Mediterranean breezes.
We spin in cycles.
I’m on top,
now on bottom,
a tussle with self-fulfilled prophecy;
I just want this ride to end.
These are quiet times,
charred ruins of Pompeii,
like Pisa I lean, bend to you
uncertain which direction is North.
©2008-2009 ~sconosciutonoto
:iconsconosciutonoto:

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To Rome (the beaches of Italy):


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:iconcritmass:
immediate fave

more 2 follow

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its not too late to become what you were meant to be
:iconcritmass:
this is such an incredible piece

and i pray it gets published

i want to read it from my porch

at the cafe

on the patio by day

and in summer at night

bug zappers and all

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its not too late to become what you were meant to be
:iconsconosciutonoto:
Wow. Thanks, love. It's far more honest than I've been lately. After Conundrum, I've been lost.

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"I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart. I am. I am. I am."
--Sylvia Plath

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:icongirlinlandscape:
wow. the ending really sets it apart. I love when the images themselves can reflect back on the emotion or situation of the piece. It is often hard to acheive. excellent.

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come and pierce me at my hunger mark.
:iconsconosciutonoto:
thanks, doll. your kindness is the brightest gem.

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"I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart. I am. I am. I am."
--Sylvia Plath

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:iconsub3r3:
"Stuck inside the rhythm
of the shape shifter’s groove,
a Ferris wheel that overlooks the sea,
chases Mediterranean breezes."

This stands out. It's very beautiful.

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Every fortress has a weak spot.
:iconsconosciutonoto:
My gosh, Panos. It's been ages...

and thank you. :)

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"I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart. I am. I am. I am."
--Sylvia Plath

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:iconsub3r3:
You are welcome :)

Really, how many years has it been? Two? More?

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Every fortress has a weak spot.
:iconsconosciutonoto:
Going on four, dear. What have you been up to?

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"I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart. I am. I am. I am."
--Sylvia Plath

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